MacDougal's
Rule
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Cover Art by Stacey L. King |
Maxie Travis is a
dispatcher for the Temple Police Department. Seth MacDougal is one of
the police officers who she'd like to know a whole lot better. But
Seth has a rule about not dating anyone he works with. Maxie has
decided it's time to break MacDougal's Rule. One hot summer night,
Maxie takes matters into her own hands in a unique and delightfully
refreshing way.
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"You've got to get out of there,
Maxie. It's against the law, you know. I don't want to have to arrest you."
"Would you, Seth? Arrest me?"
She opened her eyes wide, all innocence. "I've never been to
jail." She held her arms out in front of her, offering herself
to him. "I think it would be okay if you arrested me though.
Want to handcuff me? I've never been handcuffed either." There
was an imp in that lopsided, sensual grin she gave him. What in hell
was she up to?
The idea of handcuffing her brought
other visions to his mind. And it wasn't going to be for a trip to
jail. The longer he stood here, the worse it was getting.
"Are you drunk, Maxie? How much
have you had to drink tonight?"
"Well, let's see." She seemed
to pause to consider. Lifting her gaze to the sky, she tapped that
cute little chin of hers with her index finger. He rolled his own
eyes heavenward as there went that little sexy pink tongue of hers
again as she seemed to seriously contemplate on how to answer his
question. "I did drink practically a gallon of strawberry
lemonade." She looked at him with a wide smile. "Maybe that
was it. All those lemons and strawberries, maybe I'm punch drunk.
Would that be right?"
Then she made a moue with her lips, and
damn, but weren't they just asking to be kissed. He'd fought so long
against wanting her; this wasn't fair.
He also knew she wasn't going to come
out of the damn water on her own. With a heavy sigh, he sat down on
the flat edge of the fountain ledge and took off his socks and
sneakers. No point in ruining a pair of perfectly good Nikes. He set
them down on the sidewalk, then turned and stepped up onto the flat
ridge of the fountain, feeling the smooth, cool marble beneath his feet.
He looked across at her. Would she stay
put until he got to her? Or would she decide it was game time and try
for a game of come-and-get-me-if-you-can? There was a certain
challenge in her eyes as she stared back at him, one perfect golden
eyebrow slightly arched.
"All right, Maxie," he warned,
"I'm coming to get you. Are you sure you want it this way?"
He waited for her to answer him.
"Think you're man enough to take
me, Officer? It might not be so easy you know." She flagrantly
stood there, hands on her rounded hips, legs splayed, head tilted at
a slight angle, actually baiting him.
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What
the Reviewers are saying... |
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4-1/2 Kisses!! ..This
enticing tale between dispatcher MaxieTravis and Officer Seth
MacDougal is sure to melt icebergs! ... It's sizzling heat without
the humidity! One hot read I'm sure you'll enjoy!
--Trula, Romance
Divas |
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5 Stilettos!! ...Ms.
Dane does a delectable job of peeling back the layers of assumptions
to reveal the inner thoughts of ... Seth and Maxi. ...The toe-curling
sex evolves so naturally, so sensually that you'll be panting like
you were there. This little short is arousingly delicious!
--Sydney, Erotic
Romance Reviews for Women |
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From a Reader... MacDougal's
Rule is such a delightful tale. It is the perfect read for a hot
summer night with its fun way to cool off. The characters of Seth and
Maxie were charming, and their story was very entertaining. These
shorter stories are great when I want to read but do not have much
time. With them, I can have a satisfying story in a short time and
yours definitely made me smile... --Amelia |
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4 1/2 Stars! ...Ms.
Dane does a fantastic job of capturing the erotic tension in the
sizzling night air as Maxie and Seth come together for the first
time. ...If you're looking for a quick read that's sure to steam up
your bedroom windows, MacDougal's rule will definitely not disappoint.
--Belle Dessler for eCataRomance
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4 Blue Ribbons! ...Adrianna
Dane gives readers a peek at the sexual tension between Seth and
Maxie and her worthwhile stunt to lure Seth to her way of thinking.
... I thoroughly enjoyed this story for Maxie's courage to go after
what she wanted and Seth's realization that breaking his rule was
well worth it. --Tracy
Marsac for Romance
Junkies |
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4
Cups! ..Adrianna
Dane has an amazing gift as a storyteller. I was captivated by the
intense heat between Seth and Maxie. The love scenes were blazing and
on fire. Ms. Dane is one author that will definitely be on my future
to buy list.
--Candy Cay for Coffee
Time Romance |
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4
Angels! ...This
is a very short erotic story, twenty pages in all, which has been
very well written and has the great potential, if the author so
desires, to be turned into a much longer, novel-length tale.
...Bravo, Ms. Dane! --Elizabeth
for Fallen
Angel Reviews |
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4
Angels! ...I
was very impressed by how easily Ms. Dane created a heartfelt and
emotional bond between Maxie and Seth. ...Maxie and Seth are a truly
adorable pair...
--Sarah W. for Fallen
Angel Reviews |
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4 Flowers-Excellent...Short
but great read the author has packed alot in this romance. Ms. Dane
has written a hot little tale. Considering the length the characters
are well developed and the storyline is interesting. The characters
have amusing moments, although brief the sexual tension is boiling
between these two and the sex is hot. I look forward to reading more
of her work. --Polly
for MayReviews.com |
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4/5 Stars, Heat Level: S...MacDougal's
Rule is a short, sweet story that will leave you wanting more. Ms.
Dane does a great job of giving the reader enough information about
Maxie and Seth that you'll feel like you truly know them, while still
keeping the story short and engaging...The interaction is sexy, fun,
and completely believable. If you're looking for a satisfying short
story, here it is! --Trang
Black, JERR |
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3.85 Stars...a
pretty good little story, and it certainly got warm while I was
reading it... Glenda
Woodrum, Reviewer |
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3.5 Hearts...This
is a great story but it is very short so if
you are reader who reads on the run this is the perfect book for
you. ... Adrianna Dane has created a quick story with plenty of
substance and interesting characters...
--Angel Brewer, The
Romance Studio |
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I
like Maxie, how she's able to leave her comfort zoneto get her man.
... This story is cute with a twist of zany and a touch of very hot sex.
--Terez for JoyfullyReviewed.com |
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5 Stars...
If you ever wondered about having sex outside on a hot night,
Adrianna Dane will get you there. You can taste, feel and smell the
sex in this book. What is better than a determined, self-disciplined,
unbearably sexy man? Perhaps a more determined, undisciplined,
unbearably horny woman. Keep an eye on your local fountains when this
book gains multiple downloads!
-- Anna
Fallon,
author of Sea Lover |
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