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MacDougal's Rule

MacDougal's Rule by Adrianna Dane

Cover Art by Stacey L. King

Maxie Travis is a dispatcher for the Temple Police Department. Seth MacDougal is one of the police officers who she'd like to know a whole lot better. But Seth has a rule about not dating anyone he works with. Maxie has decided it's time to break MacDougal's Rule. One hot summer night, Maxie takes matters into her own hands in a unique and delightfully refreshing way.

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Excerpt from MacDougal's Rule:

"You've got to get out of there, Maxie. It's against the law, you know. I don't want to have to arrest you."

"Would you, Seth? Arrest me?" She opened her eyes wide, all innocence. "I've never been to jail." She held her arms out in front of her, offering herself to him. "I think it would be okay if you arrested me though. Want to handcuff me? I've never been handcuffed either." There was an imp in that lopsided, sensual grin she gave him. What in hell was she up to?

The idea of handcuffing her brought other visions to his mind. And it wasn't going to be for a trip to jail. The longer he stood here, the worse it was getting.

"Are you drunk, Maxie? How much have you had to drink tonight?"

"Well, let's see." She seemed to pause to consider. Lifting her gaze to the sky, she tapped that cute little chin of hers with her index finger. He rolled his own eyes heavenward as there went that little sexy pink tongue of hers again as she seemed to seriously contemplate on how to answer his question. "I did drink practically a gallon of strawberry lemonade." She looked at him with a wide smile. "Maybe that was it. All those lemons and strawberries, maybe I'm punch drunk. Would that be right?"

Then she made a moue with her lips, and damn, but weren't they just asking to be kissed. He'd fought so long against wanting her; this wasn't fair.

He also knew she wasn't going to come out of the damn water on her own. With a heavy sigh, he sat down on the flat edge of the fountain ledge and took off his socks and sneakers. No point in ruining a pair of perfectly good Nikes. He set them down on the sidewalk, then turned and stepped up onto the flat ridge of the fountain, feeling the smooth, cool marble beneath his feet.

He looked across at her. Would she stay put until he got to her? Or would she decide it was game time and try for a game of come-and-get-me-if-you-can? There was a certain challenge in her eyes as she stared back at him, one perfect golden eyebrow slightly arched.

"All right, Maxie," he warned, "I'm coming to get you. Are you sure you want it this way?" He waited for her to answer him.

"Think you're man enough to take me, Officer? It might not be so easy you know." She flagrantly stood there, hands on her rounded hips, legs splayed, head tilted at a slight angle, actually baiting him.

 

What the Reviewers are saying...

4-1/2 Kisses!! ..This enticing tale between dispatcher MaxieTravis and Officer Seth MacDougal is sure to melt icebergs! ... It's sizzling heat without the humidity! One hot read I'm sure you'll enjoy! --Trula, Romance Divas

5 Stilettos!! ...Ms. Dane does a delectable job of peeling back the layers of assumptions to reveal the inner thoughts of ... Seth and Maxi. ...The toe-curling sex evolves so naturally, so sensually that you'll be panting like you were there. This little short is arousingly delicious! --Sydney, Erotic Romance Reviews for Women

From a Reader... MacDougal's Rule is such a delightful tale. It is the perfect read for a hot summer night with its fun way to cool off. The characters of Seth and Maxie were charming, and their story was very entertaining. These shorter stories are great when I want to read but do not have much time. With them, I can have a satisfying story in a short time and yours definitely made me smile... --Amelia

4 1/2 Stars! ...Ms. Dane does a fantastic job of capturing the erotic tension in the sizzling night air as Maxie and Seth come together for the first time. ...If you're looking for a quick read that's sure to steam up your bedroom windows, MacDougal's rule will definitely not disappoint. --Belle Dessler for eCataRomance Reviews

4 Blue Ribbons! ...Adrianna Dane gives readers a peek at the sexual tension between Seth and Maxie and her worthwhile stunt to lure Seth to her way of thinking. ... I thoroughly enjoyed this story for Maxie's courage to go after what she wanted and Seth's realization that breaking his rule was well worth it. --Tracy Marsac for Romance Junkies

4 Cups! ..Adrianna Dane has an amazing gift as a storyteller. I was captivated by the intense heat between Seth and Maxie. The love scenes were blazing and on fire. Ms. Dane is one author that will definitely be on my future to buy list. --Candy Cay for Coffee Time Romance

4 Angels! ...This is a very short erotic story, twenty pages in all, which has been very well written and has the great potential, if the author so desires, to be turned into a much longer, novel-length tale. ...Bravo, Ms. Dane! --Elizabeth for Fallen Angel Reviews

4 Angels! ...I was very impressed by how easily Ms. Dane created a heartfelt and emotional bond between Maxie and Seth. ...Maxie and Seth are a truly adorable pair... --Sarah W. for Fallen Angel Reviews

4 Flowers-Excellent...Short but great read the author has packed alot in this romance. Ms. Dane has written a hot little tale. Considering the length the characters are well developed and the storyline is interesting. The characters have amusing moments, although brief the sexual tension is boiling between these two and the sex is hot. I look forward to reading more of her work. --Polly for MayReviews.com

4/5 Stars, Heat Level: S...MacDougal's Rule is a short, sweet story that will leave you wanting more. Ms. Dane does a great job of giving the reader enough information about Maxie and Seth that you'll feel like you truly know them, while still keeping the story short and engaging...The interaction is sexy, fun, and completely believable. If you're looking for a satisfying short story, here it is! --Trang Black, JERR

3.85 Stars...a pretty good little story, and it certainly got warm while I was reading it... Glenda Woodrum, Reviewer

3.5 Hearts...This is a great story but it is very short so if you are reader who reads on the run this is the perfect book for you. ... Adrianna Dane has created a quick story with plenty of substance and interesting characters... --Angel Brewer, The Romance Studio

I like Maxie, how she's able to leave her comfort zoneto get her man. ... This story is cute with a twist of zany and a touch of very hot sex. --Terez for JoyfullyReviewed.com

5 Stars... If you ever wondered about having sex outside on a hot night, Adrianna Dane will get you there. You can taste, feel and smell the sex in this book. What is better than a determined, self-disciplined, unbearably sexy man? Perhaps a more determined, undisciplined, unbearably horny woman. Keep an eye on your local fountains when this book gains multiple downloads! -- Anna Fallon, author of Sea Lover

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